Well, the face is a little wonky, doesn't really convey the horror, determination, or anger of being chased. Your skybox trees(used in place of leafless bushes, I guess) are clipping through the rocks. The bobblehead doesn't really seem to serve a purpose, it's just there. If you want to scenebuild or add superfluous props, you'll need more room. Try widening the scene a bit more, and use environmental lighting(not that spotlight or whatever it is).
Yeah I just hopped on Bigcity to test the Vault Security, and one thing led to another... So sorry about the plants.
As for the bobblehead, I'm still not sure why I put it there, maybe to go with the abandon car and the suitcases, I don't know....
This is my first time seeing Jasper typing properly.
Lolol,when I saw the thread name,I thought it's some kind of sex pose screenie. :O
[QUOTE=Spectre1406;29774085]This is my first time seeing Jasper typing properly.[/QUOTE]
Ha ha,your face! [img_thumb]http://www.facepunch.com/image.php?u=353235&dateline=1299560447[/img_thumb] :frog: (I lol'ed everytime when I saw this.)
I'm not good at art and I can tell the light is wrong, when something bright is behind something, it looks like this
[img]http://media-cdn.tripadvisor.com/media/photo-s/01/24/bd/3b/sunset-at-darwin.jpg[/img]
And since that light is brighter and closer, you'd have much harsher glow around it
*Sigh* I''m still sorry. Here`s a mildly revised version, probably worse.
[img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/1175/gmbigcity0013.jpg[/img]
How come you used sky box trees so close up?
[QUOTE=Lebowski;29772336]my gentle is ready
[img_thumb]http://gyazo.com/785b9850380ce2c195096947c1b6a9a0.png[/img_thumb][/QUOTE]
thanks for the avatar
The map doesn't seem to be a good choice for screenshots either. I mean that lighting looks horrible (default map lighting that is). It's bland/dull and boring. and not even properly lit up as you can see by the last pic you posted OP. Try on a different map!
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