[QUOTE=Hairybastard;31466520]You chose relatively good camera angles for all three shots, although you forgot to zoom in. I was also confused by your attempt at a plasma ball, next time edit in one, or at the very least use the hl2 plasma ball effect. Speech bubbles were nice, the layout is pretty solid. Keep practicing, don't let trolls anger you, just ignore them. Seriously.. Just ignore them.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for advice and opinion.
[url=http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1110069-Comics-and-YOU-quot-Pacing-and-Speech-Bubbles-quot]I link you to my comic tutorial.[/url]
I don't think it'll help as much as it should because you still need to understand how to make screenshots and other simpler mechanics, but it might give you an idea on how to make speech bubbles and layout.
Also, heavily desaturated screenshots with red borders? Are you trying to find a color scheme that is almost painful?
[QUOTE=Lt_C;31469311][url=http://www.facepunch.com/threads/1110069-Comics-and-YOU-quot-Pacing-and-Speech-Bubbles-quot]I link you to my comic tutorial.[/url]
I don't think it'll help as much as it should because you still need to understand how to make screenshots and other simpler mechanics, but it might give you an idea on how to make speech bubbles and layout.
Also, heavily desaturated screenshots with red borders? Are you trying to find a color scheme that is almost painful?[/QUOTE]
Thanks. I hope I'll make it worth. If you'd like to help me with understanging how to make screenshots etc. please PM me.
The posing seems okay, but the way they're holding their weapons, the guy with the AK especially, is bad. And from what I can tell, it's hard to see after all, the posing on the predator is not very good. Not a fan of the filter either. And the emitter slowly moving towards them doesn't look very good. But it shows some promise, just work on posing first then focus on editing.
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