[QUOTE=Dadalen;22814771]Looks like the first episode of Red vs Blue. Where they go.
Guy 1 : Hey
Guy 2 : Yeah?
Guy 1 : You ever wonder why we're here?
Then Guy 2 breaks into a speech about wondering if there's a God. Looks very fimiliar actually.[/QUOTE]
Durp, the whole FREELANCER thing in the title, user name, and player model didn't tip you off?
How are we supposed to think about RvB when we read the title, and look at the "playermodel" ?
And why does this Grim fellow make the panels so bright?
Yeah I'm siding with FT here. It sounds like you took the idea from RVB and when you were found out you tried to turn the table on the guy that pointed it out.
RvB was cool until it got a story and a shit load of crossovers.
Indeed.
[QUOTE=F T;22816712]How are we supposed to think about RvB when we read the title, and look at the "playermodel" ?
And why does this Grim fellow make the panels so bright?[/QUOTE]
Moron (Son 0f Grim) thinks he looks cool wearing sunglasses constantly, my guess is he was on his laptop, outside, and forgot to take them off before he edited. i complained to him, but he was an ass and is being lazy so he refuses to reedit them.
Edit: my original player model, for any one who plays Gmod with me, was a black armored Spartan.
[QUOTE=Freelancer Jak;22817658]Moron (Son 0f Grim) thinks he looks cool wearing sunglasses constantly, my guess is he was on his laptop, outside, and forgot to take them off before he edited. i complained to him, but he was an ass and is being lazy so he refuses to reedit them.[/QUOTE]
Then practice editing your own work instead of letting a "moron" do it for you.
[QUOTE=Freelancer Jak;22817658]
Edit: my original player model, for any one who plays Gmod with me, was a black armored Spartan.[/QUOTE]
No one here plays Gmod with you and a black spartan doesn't automatically mean RVB.
It's not like "OH, he uses a black spartan model for his player model! He must be using Red VS Blue as an inspiration for a comic!"
has anybody even noticed the new comic, or whats happening in the background of it?
Yeah we aren't retarded.
Well [I]most[/I] of us aren't anyways.
Dont use NPCS
[QUOTE=Zeekybomb343;22824604]Yeah we aren't retarded.
Well [I]most[/I] of us aren't anyways.[/QUOTE]
Then why, for the sake of argument, is no no body asking: "what the fuck is he holding", "whats going on", or "where'd the ninja guy come from?"
these would be excepted as evidence of bad Quality.
and BTW, THE FUCKING PERSON WHO MADE THESE IS POINTING THIS OUT!!!
so unless you intend to use examples in your criticism, Please feel free to go to another thread and troll.
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[QUOTE=ZombieWaffle;22825351]Dont use NPCS[/QUOTE]
didn't, I posed those.
Oh snap, 2nd page.
I must calibrate, NEW SCREEN SHOTS!
not PhotoShoped,
[img]http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/174/1/6/3_Freelancers_un_Photoshoped_by_Son0fgrim.jpg[/img]
Left to right: Jack, Jay, Maria.
Shoped,
[img]http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/174/1/1/3_Freelancers__by_Son0fgrim.jpg[/img]
and a High quality one that crashed me after i took it,
[img]http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/174/3/a/gonna_be_1_of_those_days____by_Son0fgrim.jpg[/img]
Son 0f grim finally took off his shades to Shop these.
[QUOTE=Freelancer Jak;22826603]Then why, for the sake of argument, is no no body asking: "what the fuck is he holding", "whats going on", or "where'd the ninja guy come from?"
these would be excepted as evidence of bad Quality.
and BTW, THE FUCKING PERSON WHO MADE THESE IS POINTING THIS OUT!!!
so unless you intend to use examples in your criticism, Please feel free to go to another thread and troll.
[/QUOTE]
We aren't using specific examples because the overall product is so bad that it would take hours to point out every single flaw. And if you saw the problems yourself then why didn't you fix them? You aren't helping your case.
We aren't trolling. In fact your comic is so terrible that [I]it [/I]is closer to trolling than what we are saying.
And work on your spelling. Oh and you should probably calm down too.
[QUOTE=Freelancer Jak;22826603]
didn't, I posed those.
Oh snap, 2nd page.[/QUOTE]
Don't insult our intelligence. Those are obviously NPCs.
And don't flatter yourself either, you're only on two pages because your comic has a million different issues and people are trying to tell you about them.
[QUOTE=Zeekybomb343;22827703]We aren't using specific examples because the overall product is so bad that it would take hours to point out every single flaw. And if you saw the problems yourself then why didn't you fix them? You aren't helping your case.
We aren't trolling. In fact your comic is so terrible that [I]it [/I]is closer to trolling than what we are saying.
And work on your spelling. Oh and you should probably calm down too.
[/QUOTE]
over kill, just pointing out that unless you say, "this is bad because of," or "this could be improved by," (i have seen this one, but just thought i'd mention it) then I will just consider it shit feedback and move on.
[QUOTE=The Castro;22816986]RvB was cool until it got a story and a shit load of crossovers.[/QUOTE]
I really like the new series. They have started using custom animations so theres some really good fight scenes now.
^ It was good for a while, but I slowly lost interest in it, I sometimes backtrack and get back into it, maybe I'll try again. :buddy:
[QUOTE=Freelancer Jak;22828560]over kill, just pointing out that unless you say, "this is bad because of," or "this could be improved by," (i have seen this one, but just thought i'd mention it) then I will just consider it shit feedback and move on.[/QUOTE]
All right fine you want feedback? How about this:
Posing is boring and just plain terrible in most parts.
Characters are unoriginal and borderline marysues.
You used NPCs
There is little editing aside from adding some crappy text in a boring font and the other editing you do have is terrible.
You didn't crop the images and they're all separate so it's less of a comic and more of a list of pictures.
Graphics suck.
Story is boring.
Colors are washed out.
Dialogue is unoriginal and obviously an attempt to cash in on RVB.
You use GM_Construct or some variation of it.
Your spelling and grammar are absolutely atrocious. Seriously, what are you? Five?
Cursing so often in your comic doesn't sound natural and it makes you look immature.
There are other issues but I've grown tired of picking apart your so called "comic."
Okay I take back everything I said,RvB is fucking awesome again.
but this comic still sucks.
Indeed.
[QUOTE=Zeekybomb343;22829280]All right fine you want feedback? How about this:
Posing is boring and just plain terrible in most parts.
Characters are unoriginal and borderline marysues.
You used NPCs
There is little editing aside from adding some crappy text in a boring font and the other editing you do have is terrible.
You didn't crop the images and they're all separate so it's less of a comic and more of a list of pictures.
Graphics suck.
Story is boring.
Colors are washed out.
Dialogue is unoriginal and obviously an attempt to cash in on RVB.
You use GM_Construct or some variation of it.
Your spelling and grammar are absolutely atrocious. Seriously, what are you? Five?
Cursing so often in your comic doesn't sound natural and it makes you look immature.
There are other issues but I've grown tired of picking apart your so called "comic."[/QUOTE]
and that is what I fucking wanted, Thank you. that is fucking feedback. why didn't you do this before?
[QUOTE=Freelancer Jak;22829613]and that is what I fucking wanted, Thank you. that is fucking feedback. why didn't you do this before?[/QUOTE]
Why don't you stop cursing like a ten year old trying to act tough?
Why did you make such a crappy comic?
Why don't you use capitalization?
Why do you get so angry?
There are a [I]lot[/I] of questions that go unanswered.
[QUOTE=Zeekybomb343;22829668]Why don't you stop cursing like a ten year old trying to act tough?
Why did you make such a crappy comic?
Why don't you use capitalization?
Why do you get so angry?
There are a [I]lot[/I] of questions that go unanswered.[/QUOTE]
in the comic or when i post? doesn't matter, I live in a [i]very[/i] "Irish" (yeah thats a good term for my family) and they curse every other word. so I have a little bit of a problem, but i don't really care.
I felt like it.
Son 0f Grim Shops, not me.
Nic-fit's.
the original script was 25 panels long and explained who the guy in the back is. if you like i can insert the unedited pics and dialog in underneath them.
[QUOTE=Freelancer Jak;22830724]
the original script was 25 panels long and explained who the guy in the back is. if you like i can insert the unedited pics and dialog in underneath them.[/QUOTE]
For the love of god, no.
You don't know when to stop, obviously. So instead I'm just going to walk away now and never look back. But I'm warning you, these shitty comics are just going to get you more of the same.
[QUOTE=Zeekybomb343;22830831]For the love of god, no.
You don't know when to stop, obviously. So instead I'm just going to walk away now and never look back. But I'm warning you, these shitty comics are just going to get you more of the same.[/QUOTE]
no, no your not. you'll keep posting for no reason until I quiet.
But your comics are still going to be crap.
[QUOTE=Freelancer Jak;22831827]no, no your not. you'll keep posting for no reason until I quiet.[/QUOTE]
Good god, you don't learn, do you?
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