I am just kidding about that. The picture is nice, as i said before, but those props ruin it a little when you notice them >.>
I don't like it. It's too all-over-the-place.
That's what she said.
[QUOTE=Camarilla;23105913]You obviously don't get what art or graphic design is either, [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=961063[/url] that is art and graphic design silly you. We are both obviously bad at this, this guy is a god. :golfclap:[/QUOTE]
I don't want to argue, I was just trying to defend you. My post was just a natural reaction to his, maybe I shouldn't have posted it.
I see you found my shitty screenshot lol ;).
very bland for something that's supposed to be very action oriented
[QUOTE=69105;23107803]very bland for something that's supposed to be very action oriented[/QUOTE]
Your sexy.
Needs more bodies, smoke, bullet impacts, tracers, flying debris and explosions.
Apart from that, it's nice.
A lot of the models clothing are out of place with the atmosphere and setting.
Not really that great.
-Everything's white. If you were going for ME look, you'd know that everything isn't white. The future in general wouldn't look like this. Don't give me shit about "hurpadureprs it matches the map=artistic". What you want is something to counter the white, namely colors. Why do you think there are so many photographies on RED ladybugs crawling on GREEN leaves?
-Props and map doesn't go together at all. The map is very, VERY sleek and empty, and you only threw in some white-colored boxes to make like some sort of center where everyone can take cover. Long story short, It's too empty.
-Tracer inside the helicopter is too small and why it's there at all baffles me; I see no-one shooting at the helicopter from that angle. Probably someone off-screen then.
Editing on the people closest to the camera are good and the posing is good.
That is all.
[QUOTE=Sorter;23104950]You clearly don't have a clue about art and graphic design.[/QUOTE]
I do, and I can tell he's right. Everything is TOO white. Those props can't be only and just white, should have edited them to add that mirror edge's red or yellow color on the superior or inferior part of the box. ( or any object to be honest. )
[img_thumb]http://macgeeks.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/mirrors-edge.jpg[/img_thumb]
Look at that, everytime the relief changes, the color changes ( Because of the shading or because it's intended. )
Using the same color makes everything looks bland. Look at those soldiers, they're just beautiful, what if they were ALL White like those boxes? That'd be horrible. Just like the floor. It's [i]too[/i] white, people are walking and fighting over it with their dirty boots and stuff. But then again, that's not a painting and that'd be hard to edit.
That's really a good screenshot in term of posing and editing tho, I'm just pointing this out. Props to you headshotter and camarilla.
Edit: Oh silly me, that's basically what the chap above me said. Sorry.
Pretty awesome. Seems kinda hard to tell what your character us doing though, and its a bit cluttered.
Posing is okay but the camera angle and composition is as horrible as always
[QUOTE=Onirik;23117319]I do, and I can tell he's right. Everything is TOO white. Those props can't be only and just white, should have edited them to add that mirror edge's red or yellow color on the superior or inferior part of the box. ( or any object to be honest. )
[img_thumb]http://macgeeks.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/mirrors-edge.jpg[/img_thumb]
Look at that, everytime the relief changes, the color changes ( Because of the shading or because it's intended. )
Using the same color makes everything looks bland. Look at those soldiers, they're just beautiful, what if they were ALL White like those boxes? That'd be horrible. Just like the floor. It's [i]too[/i] white, people are walking and fighting over it with their dirty boots and stuff. But then again, that's not a painting and that'd be hard to edit.
That's really a good screenshot in term of posing and editing tho, I'm just pointing this out. Props to you headshotter and camarilla.
Edit: Oh silly me, that's basically what the chap above me said. Sorry.[/QUOTE]
Of course you are right and I was wrong, I don't even know why I shitposted :/.
Major fuckup on my part, apologies.
Why exactly are futuristic looking guys fighting guys wearing 1930s era clothes? Are the coat guys supposed to be time travelers or something?
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