• Beaver Fusion: Episode One
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[QUOTE=spiderleet;23000349]Kurit is the only person actually making sense and proving a point, while you people are pointing your fingers crying "troll" because you can't take any criticism. Here's something you people might want to consider. DasBoSchitt made a video called Treat or Else, it's a mix of COMEDY and horror. Horror isn't necessarily the thing that stood out to his audience, it was the comedy. It's all about knowing how to blend the themes together. I actually had to force myself to watch this video just to see why it had so many replies. People want to laugh, and this video wasn't that quick to deliver humor. Heck, sometimes the attempts to make me laugh just plain out failed. You guys posted the video on the forums, expect reviews, whether they're good or bad. Unlike YouTube, most people here are actually serious about the tips and criticism they give.[/QUOTE] Kurit's review was awful, it wasn't constructive at all, I took criticism from the two other reviews and I think everyone else did fine because those were bloody damn good reviews who showed more than just pessimism and told us how we could improve. The first episode was more a proof of concept as I have said before, most of it wasn't supposed to be funny at all which I think you missed the point of. I would outright cancel episode 2 if it weren't for how many videos it has already had given to me, unless everyone who has made a video is fine with uploading it to their own youtube whilst I get the whole plan idea down. Right now I want to make it a comedy short series with lots of shorts submitted by a ton of different people but set within a certain theme. Whilst the DasBoSchitt video you mentioned honestly wasn't a good example at blending genres together well I see what you mean. Here's my current idea; Everyone who has created a short for episode 2 or beyond can upload their short to youtube right now so they haven't wasted all their time on these shorts. There will be a deadline of 2/3 weeks once the theme is announced and if your video is funny and follows the rules fine it'll be in. Current ideas for themes are; Sci-Fi, Horror, Surreal, Deadpan and Apocalyptic(Post or otherwise). If everyone likes this idea I will go ahead with it and get this thing back on track, however I do feel slightly disrespectful for just completely dropping the current shorts I have in favour of this idea and I apologise for that. It'll be much more fun to make this way and I think alot more people would enjoy it.
[QUOTE=LightningX151;22999194]1.4 gb? That's quite a lot, try rendering in mp4 or wmv.[/QUOTE] I re-compressed it yesterday, its now only about 100mb.
[QUOTE=Yamibito;22988365]Perhaps I'll have to replan this whole thing to be comedy only, I dunno.[/QUOTE] Yeah, I think that would be nice. Because serious stuff is good, but maybe only one person doing it. If it shorts, then I guess it could be serious stuff. But I guess I was thinking these were going to be skits, and why I thought it was going to be funny.
[QUOTE=Yamibito;23004903]Kurit's review was awful, it wasn't constructive at all, I took criticism from the two other reviews and I think everyone else did fine because those were bloody damn good reviews who showed more than just pessimism and told us how we could improve. The first episode was more a proof of concept as I have said before, most of it wasn't supposed to be funny at all which I think you missed the point of. I would outright cancel episode 2 if it weren't for how many videos it has already had given to me, unless everyone who has made a video is fine with uploading it to their own youtube whilst I get the whole plan idea down. Right now I want to make it a comedy short series with lots of shorts submitted by a ton of different people but set within a certain theme. Whilst the DasBoSchitt video you mentioned honestly wasn't a good example at blending genres together well I see what you mean. Here's my current idea; Everyone who has created a short for episode 2 or beyond can upload their short to youtube right now so they haven't wasted all their time on these shorts. There will be a deadline of 2/3 weeks once the theme is announced and if your video is funny and follows the rules fine it'll be in. Current ideas for themes are; Sci-Fi, Horror, Surreal, Deadpan and Apocalyptic(Post or otherwise). If everyone likes this idea I will go ahead with it and get this thing back on track, however I do feel slightly disrespectful for just completely dropping the current shorts I have in favour of this idea and I apologise for that. It'll be much more fun to make this way and I think alot more people would enjoy it.[/QUOTE] Comedy Short Series are always done, ALWAYS. Cant we do something different ? Horror Series? Action Series? All of a sudden everyone just wants humor, not only that, but the most popular humor always gets the attention of 12 year olds, and honestly I like to target a more mature and understanding audience. I dont think the mature audience really wants another Idiots of Garrysmod. Correct me if im wrong.
[QUOTE=jmanbag;23005821]Comedy Short Series are always done, ALWAYS. Cant we do something different ? Horror Series? Action Series? All of a sudden everyone just wants humor, not only that, but the most popular humor always gets the attention of 12 year olds, and honestly I like to target a more mature and understanding audience. I dont think the mature audience really wants another Idiots of Garrysmod. Correct me if im wrong.[/QUOTE] We can do humour that isn't just a copy of those shows. Just look at Ultrahouse and They are Watermelons. Both fantastic shows made in gmod that are hilarious but different.
[QUOTE=Yamibito;23006683]We can do humour that isn't just a copy of those shows. Just look at Ultrahouse and They are Watermelons. Both fantastic shows made in gmod that are hilarious but different.[/QUOTE] Well cant EP2 just be completed with shorts of your choice and then EP3 and so far on can be whatever theme you desire.
[QUOTE=spiderleet;23009346]Learn to read. I'm staring to think you people are the trolls. That's just one of them, there's plenty more.. Something besides humor can be done. ACTION. I liked Elliot's First-Person Project's, they actually kept me hooked. It's hard to take Garry's Mod that serious, understand that.[/QUOTE] Spider, no one has been asking for you to give your opinion on matters that have no effect on you. Review the video or get out, you dont have to point fingers like a seven year old. Your just derailing this thread.
[QUOTE=spiderleet;23009962]I actually don't care if no one asked me anything, I made this forum account to express my concerns and defend what should be defended. If this is the way you're going to treat your guest and everyone else that really tries to help you, you're not going to get far. You all posted the video on the site, so expect shit like this. And just because you asked me to leave guess what I'm going to do? That's right, I'm going to stay. We're not even derailing the thread, the video that was posted is still the main topic. You're the one acting like a 7 year old.[/QUOTE] Cmon you guys, this entire argument is rediculous. Just stop bitching at eachother and talk about the machinima! We all realise it was terrible, and me and Yamibito are working together to fix it for episode 2. So everyone just chill, it's going to be allright :buddy:
Humour's my strong point anyway. Although i won't be able to make anything for a while, my graphics card broke and i'm using an old computer.
Ill address some of these concerns when i get home. its hard to do all this on my phone. one thing Faolco, no one that helped in the process agrees that its bad.
Episode 1 wasn't that bad imo.
[QUOTE=ToNz;23001931]To prove this point wrong. I have looked through all the post in this thread and No one has called anyone a troll. therefore that is invalid point. And I am being reasonable here. I do believe some things kurit said are correct but some of his criticism are one sided, in other words biased because that is only from one point of view.[/QUOTE] There has been a great deal of immature name calling amongst the members in this thread. As pointed out, Fumples comment among many are the accusations I've received for giving a normal review. Further more, I want you to tell me how my criticism is "One sided" if I was biased I woulden't have said Fumple's video was good, he's the most immature person here. [editline]04:47PM[/editline] [QUOTE=Yamibito;23004903]Kurit's review was awful, it wasn't constructive at all, I took criticism from the two other reviews and I think everyone else did fine because those were bloody damn good reviews who showed more than just pessimism and told us how we could improve. The first episode was more a proof of concept as I have said before, most of it wasn't supposed to be funny at all which I think you missed the point of. I would outright cancel episode 2 if it weren't for how many videos it has already had given to me, unless everyone who has made a video is fine with uploading it to their own youtube whilst I get the whole plan idea down. Right now I want to make it a comedy short series with lots of shorts submitted by a ton of different people but set within a certain theme. Whilst the DasBoSchitt video you mentioned honestly wasn't a good example at blending genres together well I see what you mean. Here's my current idea; Everyone who has created a short for episode 2 or beyond can upload their short to youtube right now so they haven't wasted all their time on these shorts. There will be a deadline of 2/3 weeks once the theme is announced and if your video is funny and follows the rules fine it'll be in. Current ideas for themes are; Sci-Fi, Horror, Surreal, Deadpan and Apocalyptic(Post or otherwise). If everyone likes this idea I will go ahead with it and get this thing back on track, however I do feel slightly disrespectful for just completely dropping the current shorts I have in favour of this idea and I apologise for that. It'll be much more fun to make this way and I think alot more people would enjoy it.[/QUOTE] You say my review wasn't constructive however your accusation lacks any examples. I told you to spend more time on it, many of your mistakes can be fixed if you just spend more time on it. You're expecting I give a ton of examples for such a short pointless video. At this time, there's not much else I can say, I told you it doesn't deserve a review. I'm sorry, I wasn't entertained at all, it wasn't funny.
Alrighty then. I'm going to lurk this forum and not post until I finish what I need to finish. Until then. bai bai everyone
[QUOTE=Kurit;23013217]There has been a great deal of immature name calling amongst the members in this thread. As pointed out, Fumples comment among many are the accusations I've received for giving a normal review. Further more, I want you to tell me how my criticism is "One sided" if I was biased I woulden't have said Fumple's video was good, he's the most immature person here.[/QUOTE] I said some. please read carefully. [editline]01:21AM[/editline] [QUOTE=spiderleet;23009346]Learn to read.[/QUOTE] excuse me when you blaintly said: [quote=spiderleet]while you people are pointing your fingers crying "troll"[/quote]
Clam down you guys. [img]http://www.just-servers.co.uk/clam.png[/img]
[QUOTE=spiderleet;23018693]I don't see what you're trying to deliver with your post. Once again I'm going to ask that you learn how to fucking read, take your own advice my dear friend. More importantly learn to spell instead of 'blaintly' trying to grab my attention with nothing to prove.[/QUOTE] don't swear for something as little as that, mate. and the way I spelt that blatantly is slang english. telling me learning to spell issn't going to do anything either. I really don't see why you are getting riled up. I read your post again just for you and I realised I made a small error, sorry. so calm down. but as a proper response to that post then. I am not trolling at all.
[QUOTE=ToNz;23018226]I said some. please read carefully. [editline]01:21AM[/editline] excuse me when you blaintly said:[/QUOTE] Okay Tonz, tell me how "some" off my criticism is onee sided. Dont correct me without answering my question.
[QUOTE=Kurit;23028537]Okay Tonz, tell me how "some" off my criticism is onee sided. Dont correct me without answering my question.[/QUOTE] well since you didn't give me the evidence i wanted for you to prove that after effects uses more resources, so. :P
[QUOTE=ToNz;23041784]well since you didn't give me the evidence i wanted for you to prove that after effects uses more resources, so. :P[/QUOTE] That wasn't the argument, Tonz. I never said it used more performance in the task manager, I was talking about about how a good After Effects clip generally has to load way more detail than a Vegas Clip. I didn't answer your question because it was off-topic and it wasn't the point I was trying to prove. Now stop avoiding the question and just answer me, stick to the topic.
All of you quit your crying. Spiderleet, I understand you may be on Kurit's side but the second we were able to tolerate him and he was actually being constructive you came in and started crying about it. No one cares! We're supposed to be discussing about the video, the previous argument was settled, no need to get all that sand back into your vagina. Regarding the humour / quality of the shorts, I think that the video having humour should be completely optional. Why? People who want to try making a serious gmod film should get the chance to do that! For the quality, unless it's 2 second shit it should be accepted. The whole point of this project is for people to get their name out there in a fun and interesting way! If they have lower quality videos, so what? They'll get criticized for it wherever, and will try and get better ratings on their next video! It's like Ninja Warrior. If you fail the first season, try again the next!
I find the video funny in some parts, but I find the stupidity of all you guys fighting on days end even more funny. I think kurits now a genius troll and you guys are just falling for it. or hes serious, either way you're all tards.
I understand that, Scout, and I've said 'stop replying' or 'stop feeding him' multiple times. He is a fantastic troll, and he is very good at making people angry, but realistically he can't be ignored by EVERYONE, someone will break. edit: and even so you technically can't call us tards without being hypocritical. why? because you're on facepunch.. everyone on facepunch is a tard
[QUOTE=FumplesAlt;23086039]Regarding the humour / quality of the shorts, I think that the video having humour should be completely optional. Why? People who want to try making a serious gmod film should get the chance to do that! For the quality, unless it's 2 second shit it should be accepted. The whole point of this project is for people to get their name out there in a fun and interesting way! If they have lower quality videos, so what? They'll get criticized for it wherever, and will try and get better ratings on their next video! It's like Ninja Warrior. If you fail the first season, try again the next![/QUOTE] I agree with this statement. There's also the fact that there's an absurd amount of GMod comedy machinima, and a comparatively tiny amount of serious stuff, probably because it's harder to do. So it would make sense to allow those serious shorts in because it's a distinguishing feature, it's something different and more likely to be original.
[QUOTE=InvisibleTed;23102740]I agree with this statement. There's also the fact that there's an absurd amount of GMod comedy machinima, and a comparatively tiny amount of serious stuff, probably because it's harder to do. So it would make sense to allow those serious shorts in because it's a distinguishing feature, it's something different and more likely to be original.[/QUOTE] Exactly.
[QUOTE=InvisibleTed;23102740]I agree with this statement. There's also the fact that there's an absurd amount of GMod comedy machinima, and a comparatively tiny amount of serious stuff, probably because it's harder to do. So it would make sense to allow those serious shorts in because it's a distinguishing feature, it's something different and more likely to be original.[/QUOTE] I want to see people try and make Gmod horror films, now that would be funny.
[QUOTE=Kurit;23116521]I want to see people try and make Gmod horror films, now that would be funny.[/QUOTE] I tried. [editline]03:33AM[/editline] Not really a "film" though.
I began making one and my brother didn't realize it was horror and he jumped so much LOL... I used binaural tones and such to artificially heighten the viewer's sense of tension, it was really cool
[QUOTE=FumplesAlt;23118198]I began making one and my brother didn't realize it was horror and he jumped so much LOL... I used binaural tones and such to artificially heighten the viewer's sense of tension, it was really cool[/QUOTE] I want to see this.
[QUOTE=Kurit;23119834]I want to see this.[/QUOTE] I deleted it, lol.. It was interesting however I just didn't feel like continuing production.. kind of how i am with every video i make LOL
[QUOTE=FumplesAlt;23123681]I deleted it, lol.. It was interesting however I just didn't feel like continuing production.. kind of how i am with every video i make LOL[/QUOTE] Alyx VS L4D 2 was supposed to be scary. I later just said forget it, I'll make it whatever it ended up to be, pure awesomeness. I know how much you loved it Fumples. You and Max.
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