There's some FOV issues in some panels where the shot gets a fisheye lens effect because it's not zoomed in enough, and the comic editing could use some work - for instance, it's clear that the speechbubbles are just default ones and there's some weird positioning of the text in the first panel where it's not even close to centered. [url=http://forums.metrocop.net/topic/7882253/]This tutorial[/url] might help you learn how to make better, custom speechbubbles.
That said, it's a good effort and I look forward to seeing what comes next! Albeit you're not gonna have much luck posting a comic on Facepunch, there seems to be a strong disinterest in those around here nowadays.
There's nothing coming next; I just did this for some posing and lighting practice more than anything else. Thanks for the tips though; I'll keep 'em in mind for any future comics I do.
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