It took almost 4 minutes to load fully. What size is it?
(Other than that it's pretty good)
It's 3mb, it's just that wduwant pics generally take time to load.
I get what you were going for, but there's just way too much visual noise in it.
I feel like the skeleton could have been more the focus of the picture, and the bones a tad brighter
[t]http://i.imgur.com/3DxBkkD.jpg[/t]
I played too much Titanfall 2
Just a WiP pic for Espionage Wars/ experimenting with desert lighting & fog:
[IMG]https://s24.postimg.org/isbcl07et/PIOP_in_some_desert_place_wip2.jpg[/IMG]
C&C is welcome.
[editline]11th January 2017[/editline]
Bonus pic:
[T]https://s27.postimg.org/sgc2q0c0j/penumbra_in_casino_test.jpg[/T]
[QUOTE=CSLeader;51655822]Just a WiP pic for Espionage Wars/ experimenting with desert lighting & fog:
[/QUOTE]the only way to get great outdoors lighting is to not use a map with pre-existing lighting at all, because Source's map lighting is shit. scenebuilding and completely or almost completely lamp-based lighting yields the best results.
mostly a model test shot and not even a scenebuild, i save thread-making for stuff that has the potential to be impressive
There's just not enough dakka to warrant a thread.
this man gets it^
[T]https://u.nya.is/nhxjiv.jpg[/T]
Have a thing that also contains a lack of dakka.
[QUOTE][video=youtube;woJcJ8zTnBQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=woJcJ8zTnBQ[/video][/QUOTE]
[T]https://u.nya.is/rjoyez.jpg[/T]
When you leave Ahmed in charge of the PA system for the call to mosque.
#justISISthings
[t]http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/103980755815626998/0D74F8D5CAA2544BB8D58691874566E35F46A345/[/t]
Ported over a full base from S.T.A.L.K.E.R and decided to do a little pose with it
[t]https://feen.us/5knday2pk9.png[/t]
Here's how it looks with nothing else added
[t]http://i.imgur.com/m08cIfs.jpg[/t]
Please do not expose your demons to inappropriate content.
*Accidentally crushes head*
"Papa Hellknight, what is that man doing to that female Hellknight?"
"Cover yer eyes, child!"
Just wanted to practice some posing. It's been a while since I had the chance to again!
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/14249973/Gray%20Saints%20Comic/rangersoffthebeach.jpg[/img]
[img]https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/14249973/Gray%20Saints%20Comic/britishparas.jpg[/img]
I figured out how to make colorable grass.
[IMG]http://www.wduwant.com/index_uploads/uploads/10268f0b7361.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=justinl132;51669360]img[/QUOTE]It's a good start on a decent idea, and the posing and angle are in a good position to be further iterated upon, but there's just... no lighting. And that just kind of kills it.
Drop in some blue lights (and possibly a volumetric one at the back) to give the sense of a night time scene, add a glisten to the barrels of guns (the one held by the goon on the right tends to disappear into the darkness of his gloves and suit due to the lack of contrast between the three elements) and make the face of the crawling man more visible.
As for the posing, the three front goons are mostly on point, although I'd personally lower the middle goon's arms a bit since it's kind of odd that he's the only non-relaxed guy in the trio. The goon in the back seems kind of weirdly posed, and I'd probably give him something different to do - maybe reloading his weapon?
The corpse on the right is a bit stiff for a slumped body. Bend his spine a bit to his left to slump him over a bit more naturally/dramatically.
The femme fatale in the center, well, she's kind of stiff as a rake and doesn't really show much in the way of emotion. Adjust the positioning of her pelvis, bend her spine a little and adjust her left shoulder to add some natural weight to her pose. Her facial expression also doesn't really fit the fact that she's shooting a man dead. Given the situation, you can have a lot of fun playing with that - if she's sad, smug, detached, angry... that can tell an entire unseen story in and of itself.
Hope this helps! You have a good start, it just needs a bit more of a push.
If you resise the grass field with the effect resiser you can make the grass bend more/ make it look more wavy and shorter. Here's an example.
[IMG]http://www.wduwant.com/index_uploads/uploads/322bc42b3d2b.jpg[/IMG]
Still working on other types of grass. Hopefully, will release it later tomorrow.
[QUOTE=The Kins;51669406]Really good advice[/QUOTE]
[IMG_thumb]http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/96099456472888218/A590250E7AEEBEBB5A1E3688B0E281D4179CC0BB/[/IMG_thumb]
[IMG_thumb]http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/96099456472898032/1157995638218E67E924264D97B8FBE9FF4B8395/[/IMG_thumb]
V2 of the same pic. I had to remake the entire scene from scratch cause the Save Corrupted. Did it improve?
[QUOTE=justinl132;51669865]V2 of the same pic. I had to remake the entire scene from scratch cause the Save Corrupted. Did it improve?[/QUOTE]Very much so! The lighting and the posing improvements to the woman are a huge improvement.
"Want To Post A Picture But Don't Want To Make A Thread" - Thread V6: FOR THE LOVE OF GOD STOP POSTI
