Edges of the tank are way too defined and it contrasts badly with how you've tried to apply depth of field to it.
I get that you're going for battle-weary look, but it just looks like they've been rubbing their faces on a hot grill all day.
The uniforms look too clean for the condition their faces are in to make any sense.
Their uniform is dirty as hell though, compare them with [url=http://u.cubeupload.com/HooptyHaupt/poster160401165314.jpg]this[/url] , they both use the same base texture.
Also the face looks like shit because of the color correction and the resizing of the original, they look better there :
[url]http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2016/14/1459779153-poster-16-04-03-22-01-54.jpg[/url]
The uniforms look exactly the same to me. The only difference I can see is that you made the creases darker.
[thumb]http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/275091545286943901/2DA79825AD3130255339A44E110B8981C170C474/[/thumb]
I think I'm gonna do a comic, this is one of the scenes, without captions.
[QUOTE=Trek;50066507][thumb]http://images.akamai.steamusercontent.com/ugc/275091545286943901/2DA79825AD3130255339A44E110B8981C170C474/[/thumb]
I think I'm gonna do a comic, this is one of the scenes, without captions.[/QUOTE]
It looks very high quality, I already like it. By the way, where are the suits guys from? They look very neat.
[editline]4th April 2016[/editline]
[QUOTE=darkness279;50063391][B]Nothing much just Dark Angels doing stuff.
[/B]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/QJDTJvZ.jpg[/img]
[img]http://i.imgur.com/3r0pJ3D.jpg[/img][/QUOTE]
These are very aesthetically pleasing, especially the first one, even though they're not firing guns.
Inspired by Midnight Club and lowriders
[img]http://i.cubeupload.com/vV7QZI.jpg[/img]
[QUOTE=Crazy Knife;50067397]It looks very high quality, I already like it. By the way, where are the suits guys from? They look very neat.
[/QUOTE]
Thanks, the suit guys are from a "suit citizens pack" Taggart mae at some point, I have them laying around for years, so I don't know if you can still download them. Also, I replaced the facemaps with the FF ones.
[QUOTE=Minimole;50071605]Inspired by Midnight Club and lowriders
[/QUOTE]
Definitely some GTA: San Andreas vibes. I like it.
Ground is low-res and you should up your anti-alias.
Thanks also I wasn't sure if they should fire or not since this is more of a face to face battle.
in a scene like that a ton of gunfire might just look distracting
Three things that's stopping me from making pictures:
1.) I can't do actual good lighting without gmod taking a graphical dump
2.) there isn't a single german volkspolice model on gmod
3.) I crash on singleplayer
[QUOTE=KestrelFesler;50073049]Three things that's stopping me from making pictures:
1.) I can't do actual good lighting without gmod taking a graphical dump
2.) there isn't a single german volkspolice model on gmod
3.) I crash on singleplayer[/QUOTE]
1.) Use [URL="https://facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=1468526"]this[/URL].
2.) Pose other things.
3.) Make a clean install, verify game cache, and disable all addons.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/s4rL9PL.jpg[/IMG]
[QUOTE=Trek;50071969]Thanks, the suit guys are from a "suit citizens pack" Taggart mae at some point, I have them laying around for years, so I don't know if you can still download them. Also, I replaced the facemaps with the FF ones.[/QUOTE]
Yes, I have the suits, I rocgnize them, but the faces is what caught my eye as well. What's FF facemaps exactly? Steam addon?
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/biCsqNv.jpg[/IMG]
I'd edit it with rocket shots and explosions and such but I don't know how.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ey7OSa2.jpg[/IMG]
Not great, kind of a troll-y shot. I wanted Heavy to be more dreamy but I couldn't get his face to lean against his hands.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/QbXfINW.jpg[/IMG]
Really low-res everything. I saw this and took the opportunity. Don't take it seriously haha.
[QUOTE=Crazy Knife;50075773]What's FF facemaps exactly? Steam addon?[/QUOTE]
The only thing that comes to my mind is Fake Factory
[QUOTE=RichCrentist;50078005]Thread-worthy, man.[/QUOTE]
I already made a thread a week ago. Don't wanna fill the forum with another one. Beside, these were easy and fun to make lol.
ok im done being retarded here we go
[t]http://orig15.deviantart.net/9205/f/2016/085/4/f/geth_related_joke_here_by_erkor-d9wi7ae.png[/t]
[t]http://orig03.deviantart.net/0254/f/2016/095/e/1/crash_site_cleanup_by_erkor-d9xv9bo.png[/t]
[t]http://orig08.deviantart.net/3974/f/2016/089/3/a/trek_through_deadwind_by_erkor-d9x1gxw.png[/t]
[t]http://orig14.deviantart.net/061e/f/2016/090/3/a/honorless_by_erkor-d9ueh5m.png[/t]
how do i improve making picture things
i wish i knew how to make that kinda lens flare in photoshop because the actual model looks like dick
[editline]a[/editline]
theres a lens flare model is what i meant
[QUOTE=erkor;50078555]i wish i knew how to make that kinda lens flare in photoshop because the actual model looks like dick
[editline]a[/editline]
theres a lens flare model is what i meant[/QUOTE]
[video=youtube;6kra2pg5F-s]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kra2pg5F-s[/video]
These lens flare is pretty good. Unlike the one you used, this is in the particle file which can be a pain in the ass but trust me, there're a lot better than the one you have. Follow the tutorial for guidance.
thanks holy shit
[QUOTE=erkor;50078555]i wish i knew how to make that kinda lens flare in photoshop because the actual model looks like dick
[editline]a[/editline]
theres a lens flare model is what i meant[/QUOTE]
Here take my lens flare.
[IMG]http://www.wduwant.com/index_uploads/uploads/412c0c.jpg[/IMG]
When you need a lens flare, drag that lens flare onto your image, set it to "screen", position it by scaling, and to change its color simply hold CTRL + U and adjust the HUE. Simpes.
wow u guys are so friendly wtf
Sorry, you need to Log In to post a reply to this thread.