Unsinkable - Garry's Mod - Facepunch Forum

[QUOTE=Exorade;42870828]I don't think the format matters. It looks pretty horrid either way. Whatever that stuff is you slapped on most of the screens is ugly as hell. And rule number one, use [U]speech bubbles[/U].[/QUOTE] Tell me why. Anyone can just say, that comic is shit.

I didn't just say that your comic is shit. As far as I can see, what I said is quite self explanatory. But here I'll spell it out: Whatever that white filter rape is that you used on every screen in your comic, it looks fucking horrible. If you thought it would make them magically look better, you were wrong.

New strip is already here! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_242463279[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_242463088[/url]

Aand the filter still looks horrible. Congratulations.

Seirously, whatever crazy glowing-hexagon/lens filter / overexposure filter(s) you're using every panel, STOP USING THEM. Fill the area better with lighting. Secondly, and this I can look past more because English is not your first language, the dialogue seems a bit...simple. Childish, even. Maybe someone can help you with that? Thirdly, the posing looks a little on the stiff side. And fourthly, what Exorade said, use dialogue bubbles.

New strip is already here! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_244867362[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_244867203[/url]

Sinkable.

New strip is already here! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_247312718[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_247312250[/url]

Okay you're clearly not taking our advice here. The shitty filter is still there, the English is still off by a sizeable margin, and the other effects are rather crappy. 2/10, I'm done with this thread.

Oh shit, there's a russian mafia. btw. I love the first one, I laughed so hard.

No Molly Brown 0/10

A fucking big post as an answer to anything, that i heard in this thread. So, about those shitty filters. I know, that i can make picture much better. In fact, i can waste a hours to make magnificent lights and bokeh. That's how i create my single scenes. But i cant do the same, when i creating my comic. I just haven't enough time. On this week i even had to much shorten strip. And what is most important, my russian subscribers are loving this effects. I don't care about that graphics actually really bad, when statistics of my public page still growing. Now about dialogues. They are so poor and short not because of my bad writing skills or knowledge of english (they are translated word-to-word from original, actually). I dont think, that small humoristic comic, that is made just for fun, in need of more dialogues. It's still funny anyway, and i don't see any reason to change it somehow.

I pity your Russian subscribers.

New strip is already here! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_249979046[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_249978756[/url]

New strip is already here! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_252742216[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_252742039[/url]

New strip is already here! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_255492857[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_255492627[/url]

I don't notice anything different other than the same crappy filter,PNG format that takes forever to load and the bad grammar. My opinion,put some more work into your comic rather than just slapping some crystal filter on it ,otherwise just stop posting it here and let the Unsinkable sink already.

Torchwood01, don't dishonor the russian community.

Everything is bad. [IMG]http://static4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130816031931/thefakegees/images/f/fc/Dolan_vector_by_sapphirebeam-d5aantn.png[/IMG] [highlight](User was banned for this post ("Meme reply macro" - MaxOfS2D))[/highlight]

Special strip! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_257486191[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_257486191[/url]

[QUOTE=Torchwood01;43401550]Special strip! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_257486191[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_257486191[/url][/QUOTE] I actually like this one better than the rest

[QUOTE=Torchwood01;43401550]Special strip! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_257486191[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_257486191[/url][/QUOTE] Charming. At this point I don't know whether I should reiterate past criticisms, upbraid you for posting a hand-drawn, complainy shit-comic in a subforum exclusively for Garry's Mod content, or just ignore this thread completely.

[QUOTE=mcharest;43406235]Charming. At this point I don't know whether I should reiterate past criticisms, upbraid you for posting a hand-drawn, complainy shit-comic in a subforum exclusively for Garry's Mod content, or just ignore this thread completely.[/QUOTE] I dunno. That "special" strip is just a joke, i think i'll make a normal one in gmod on a weekend. [editline]4th January 2014[/editline] [QUOTE=Alsojames;43404225]I actually like this one better than the rest[/QUOTE] I was expecting a comment like yours.

This is some very unfunny shit. Simply put. It seems most everyone has already reiterated time and time again just what you need to do to actually improve whatever it is this is supposed to be yet you blatantly ignore everyone. The filter is crap, the humor is childish and so far the "story" you have going isn't going anywhere. It's literally three pictures of bullshit most of the time. Unfunny, horribly posed, distracting and unnecessary filter and lack of initiative toward criticism has me convinced that you're not here to improve. I seriously pity your Russian viewers as I can't imagine people reading this thinking it's legitimately good.

New strip is already here! (eng): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_259617004[/url] (rus): [url]https://vk.com/doc-60292650_259616582[/url]

Yay, the filter is gone... Replaced by another one. Pretty much as horrible as the first one. :suicide: You're still not using any speech bubbles, posing is still awkward, the dialog is still stupid and the characters in your strip moved two meters (figuratively). Last but not least, you're still not posting those comics here. I'm not sure why you're signing it with your name, are you actually proud of it? [thumb]https://ps.vk.me/c538111/u167599063/docs/932bed6374ef/9_eng.png?extra=rRmQXytmOMtRflQCK9aSboHYhlBtr0TdKtM9vAQnROTJvNZZu58r_Y-uaI6CS2dIpMAaaToDy54LNegpWJ4SW7tY7hB_pg[/thumb]

For someone who claims to have a more-than-nothing knowledge of the WH40k universe, specifically the Imperials, you haven't really any actual knowledge to bring to the table. The Inquisition would never just seal something up and leave it. They'd either destroy it wholesale, take it off-world to be studied (or destroyed), or simply [URL="http://warhammer40k.wikia.com/wiki/Exterminatus"]nuke it from orbit[/URL]. At the very least, there'd be a huge ass barricade of some design to keep people out. Possibly even Astartes.