2 Nerds

My first comics! Click on the links to view.

Episode 1: Taking Care of Business
http://filesmelt.com/dl/2NerdsEP1v1.jpg

Episode 2: First Day on the Job
http://filesmelt.com/dl/2NerdsEP2v1.jpg

C&C please. :v:

Not bad for your first.

Thanks. I know I’m going to get flamed for this but I didn’t really put my best effort in to these. :v:

Is gut

I liked the first one, but the second one I didn’t like so much.

It’s all a matter of opinion I suppose.

[editline]12:42AM[/editline]

Quick question, would you guys like me to keep this an on going comic? I was thinking of making it serious/funny. The second one IS a squeal to the first after all.

If you plan on continuing this at least try to make it “funny”. If you can’t do funny, go for a serious approach then. It’s currently predictable, boring, overdone (Male07 and 09, retarded friends on an unfunny, retarded adventure…seriously?)and just plain stupid. Stupid faces and antics only work so well; this is an example of it not working at all.

I’ll aim towards a more serious comic then. Thanks for the C&C!

The cross eyes was perfectly executed with the lua errors.

Wise choice. Don’t be discouraged, I believe only a few people can make legitimately funny gmod comics (most of whom don’t even originate from this forum). I personally can’t pull off “funny” comics so serious ones are always in the business for me.

Who knows, maybe as you’re making the serious comic you’ll start finding some good punchlines/moments for humor.

You are one of the best people I have met for criticism. I need a kick in the butt sometimes. :v: Thank for your help!

[editline]01:48AM[/editline]

I felt the EXACT same way…