I think you forgot the guy with a sign yelling “IT’S THE END OF THE WORLD!!!11!!1!1”
Nice image, though the sky could be darker.
you never seen one before?
The “eclipse” looks a bit ridiculous really. It’s just a black circle that has been drawn over the sun. There needs to be a stronger effect around the circle, like in these pictures:
Also, your circle is more like an oval.