A genertic Sniper generically calls in generic off-screen enemies

Generically of course
(1st scene build)

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/249/gmflatgrass0002z.jpg

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5841/gmflatgrass0000g.jpg

not bad of a scene build

Generic, as you said, but it’s a really nice scenebuild. Posing looks good as well.

whoa why does that bush have a gun
no wait one second thats chewbaca never mind

I think you should have put the DOF focus on the dudes head. would make it a bit better but thats just my opinion. lol.
pose is really good but the simple lighting doesnt make it stand out at first.

good overal but you should learn to edit… makes your screenshot look a lot better :smiley: