A Night in the Horror House pt 1

Follow the tale of what happened in Horror House

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Not really much here to comment on.

You’ve established the setting and the protagonist, posing is decent and editing is OK, but nothing really plot-wise. Instead of a “part one,” it’s more of a snippet. But maybe part two will be longer?

Wonderfully ok. Nothing SUPER SPECTACULAR, but nothing glaringly bad. Like Koopaonfire said, it seems short, more like a preview than a part 1. Also, all the dutch angles are giving me flashbacks to “Battlefield Earth”…
shudders