Follow the tale of what happened in Horror House
Not really much here to comment on.
You’ve established the setting and the protagonist, posing is decent and editing is OK, but nothing really plot-wise. Instead of a “part one,” it’s more of a snippet. But maybe part two will be longer?
Wonderfully ok. Nothing SUPER SPECTACULAR, but nothing glaringly bad. Like Koopaonfire said, it seems short, more like a preview than a part 1. Also, all the dutch angles are giving me flashbacks to “Battlefield Earth”…