A person about to jump off a building

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This was my first time doing rain.

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Looks nice. But something makes it look like they aren’t ragdolls. Well the one on the edge.
Also mind making a tutorial on rain? I’d would really like if you or someone else could make a tutorial.

The rain is too uniform and it lacks depth.

The rain is shit, I know.

He’s gonna slip in the rain.

I won’t jump, if you can just stop aiming at me for once.

The rain needs more contrast, and you might want to create three or four layers of rain, where the one that’s supposed to be closest to the camera is large and out of focus.
And so on… (The third or fourth scaled much smaller, and being blurred)