A Shot in the Dark

Garry's Mod general
#1

Hello everyone, I am a long time lurker and recent poster here at the Screenshot & Movies section of Facepunch. I used to post on a different account a couple years ago but quit after I began to see no progress in my work. So, I took a break and now I am back, this is my first before and after edit in about 2 years.

Before I edited:
http://i.imgur.com/b65VN.jpg

After I edited:
http://i.imgur.com/2S3hz.jpg

EDIT #2: I played around with the muzzleflash a bit more, still looks cheesy imo.
http://i.imgur.com/gqMFe.jpg

Please leave any feedback or comment on what you wish, I will appreciate anything that I read below this post :slight_smile:
And if anyone knows how to make the pictures fit to page that would be greatly noted because I acknowledge the fact my pictures are too big.

#2

lightbulb gun. It shoots photons

[editline]8th May 2012[/editline]

It kind of looks like he’s fixing his flashlight, i think it’s cute

#3

Pew pew, set phasers to stun. I had no idea how to approach a frontal muzzleflash. Cheers!

Edit: Just noticed, the damn muzzleflash is too small.

#4

second is good, but tone down on the little flare it projects from the muzzle thing.

#5

Dooley noted, thanks for the feedback!

#6

Would look good at a angle in a real screenshot, see the real muzzle flash and so it won’t look like a flashlight :x

#7

It’s Ok. The guy isn’t really looking at the fire direction, there’s very little to see and editing isn’t really that important.

:rolleyes:

#8

Thanks for the feedback, I have different angles but this was the one I decided to work with. I’ll be sure to capture the action and direct the head and eyes properly next time.