A Snipers Worst Dream{Scene Build}

Well its my first scene build >_>

and heres the pictures…
http://filesmelt.com/downloader/gm_flatgrass00162.jpg
http://filesmelt.com/downloader/gm_flatgrass00191.jpg

C&C

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And the sniper is crawling towards his barely visible dead comrade

Floating rocks? and why is there a citadel right there, i’m sorry but by no means does that fit AT all in that scene. the idea is good just work on the rocks and make it clearer that the soldier is dead (the comrade), and possibly a little editing?

I don’t get it.

He was showing off a scene that he created in flatgrass using props

I think it is great

Meh its a first

and i was on flatgrass building and i wanted to pose so