A survivor mourning the aftermath of an attack

http://www.imagebee.net/images/x4r4tw1popfct69bl11.jpg

this is my first serious pose, so I’d prefer it if you didn’t say something to the effect of “lololol this sux go die”. Anyways, I personally think that the posing is a little weird, but please tell me your opinions on it.

Way too stiff, he’s leaning forward too much.

And needs Editing.

Also; turn on Anti-Aliasing.

Thanks for that, I’ll bear it in mind. A problem is that I can’t edit for shit, so I’m pretty screwed in the editing department.

Everything looks… unnatural. Maybe add some more debris?

Posing is stiff. Picture is too blurry and empty.