Scene from bird-view:
Nice Scenebuild, but the colouring and anti-aliasing kinda kill it
The picture of the scenebuild looks better
[sub]a.k.a. the second one[/sub]
It’s a nice little scenebuild practice. Unfortunately it’s nothing more then that. The actual scenebuild is, neat. The final product, not very pleasant to look at. Use sdof, don’t rape the contrast and color. Think about what you want to stick out and what you want to be subtle, right now the focus of the picture is a low quality bush in the far left corner.
use some fog to add depth next time; right now it looks boring and flat, devoid of any atmosphere
You didn’t do much, and that blur is still really distracting.
I love this pic so much great job