Adventure Fortress

What can I do better next time, I got mixed reviews from the two other places I popped this up.

Way to short and lacking of a good punchline. Great posing though.

Duely noted,

Way too wide a comic in my opinion, should be 1000x(insert length here) or something smaller.

Also, needs more The Adventures of Mythos and Gnome (even though nobody will get that).