All these years, maybe we should stop fighting...

saw a couple of mistakes had to re-edit

Who’s he talking to?

Way too empty, and he’s not even touching the cliff.

My mum and dad

All these years, maybe we should produce something worthwhile…

Whaat? Too harsh?
Boring, pointless pose.

You wanna make it better?
Don’t use TF2 for a “serious” pose unless you’re a fuckin’ Russian with Photoshop.
Make it less empty. Be it props, poses, fuckin’ clip it- make it less empty.
Why the hell are there shell cases? Has he been spending time disassembling bullets? Show it.

“a couple mistakes” my ass. The concept is a mistake.
Fix that.