"Alright boys, get your masks on. Lets do this shit."

http://puu.sh/cjsY

One of my first poses, enjoy.

Your editing could fit with a different picture, but for now I suggest you improve your posing a bit and use some nicer models. The dude on the far right’s wrist looks broken, and the finger posing’s kinda shoddy.

Also, it’s kind of too dark to see what’s going on, and from what I can see there’s very little action of any sort. I suggest you do some poses without editing first, then move on to post-processing gradually.

Gray highlights.