Ambush

What do you guys think?

http://filesmelt.com/dl/ambush.png

Try not to use structures like Lol Epic Fail and “owned” here.

It’s looked down on by the community.

it seems to look like your ordinary game of css, so that language might fit

Also improve your posing.

and learn how to spell grenade right, it’s not grendane and i don’t know if antialiasing is on, and there’s this thing called “fingerposer” use it.

Honestly, the layout of the comic was actually done pretty well, and made me think the posing was part of a bigger joke or something.

I think just work on your posing in general and you’ll be good. :slight_smile: And yes, definitely remember to finger pose. Finger/face posing make the picture look loads more believable.

Thank you for the feed back. I was hoping to get input on it so I can improve.