American Smoking a Cig ( Edit Test )

I think i really got the smoke down on this one.

You can barely see the smoke,the blur behind him is horrible and the pinky finger looks kinda fucked up.

Better? Gogo accidently switching to camera and taking an un blurred pic!

Also, i have no idea what the fucks wrong with the pinky, low res hand textures maybe? I honestly have no clue.

needs to be brighter.

Lighting and there needs to be alot more smoke.

I’m not a smoker so, how much more smoke?

and, i was wondering, what needs lighting, and then it hit me, his face because of the cig :clint:

thats dod

Yuck, simple DoF

Why is he going Up yours?

Good job?

Fixed.

Wow…Why was this thread bumped?

Here’s another bump.
To say:

Why do you think this thread was “bumped”? The comments before this one were all within an hour of the one before. That’s not bumping.

How dare you “fix” my posts? :saddowns: