Betrayal

First thread here

http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/5857/betrayalo.jpg

So this is my picture about betrayal, the one who is getting shot has killed one of own and that guy has to deal with him, there is much tension in the air.
Now tell me how did i do and how to do better!

I’m not sure what emotion the guy on the right is trying to express but he just kinda looks like he wants to take a dump.

deep

[editline]30th December 2011[/editline]

i’m crying

Needs more work on the posing quite a lot.
Btw has the guy pointing the the gun found another dude that just filmed the whole crime scene or what? Why is he even looking at that direction??

well i tried to make it seem like its hard to kill him since ‘’ he has known him for a while and they are friends ‘’