BSAA Guy drags his wounded buddy

Couldn’t really think of a name. Wanted to do a scene that was a bit more “actiony”.

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Couldn’t add a blood wound since the blood in-game is glitched for me. Just the checkerboard purple-black stuff.

Original.

http://www.wduwant.com/index_uploads/uploads/9da94d78cf6b.jpg

Is that supposed to be snow? Also, It isn’t bad, but there’s a lot of empty space. I’d work on filling that up.

To me it looks like the snow is falling sideways, perpendicular to the street, as opposed to down and on an angle. Maybe it’s the focus, or maybe it’s just me.

Also, the wounded guy being dragged along looks like he’s giving a weird face to the camera.

Not snow, just supposed to be falling stuff. And yeah I’ll work on the empty stuff.