Bundeswehr soldiers in a asylum.

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#1

Edit and pose by me, done with gimp. C&C please.

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http://filesmelt.com/downloader/dm_cod4_vacant_rc10016.jpg

Original
[media]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/dm_cod4_vacant_rc100161.jpg

#2

Blur and smoke aren’t good. Lighting and contrast is dull.

Overall the original image is better.

#3

I see some clipping on the hands and the picture is a little blurry compared to the original. The smoke is looking good and the overall posing is allright.

#4

Never blur the whole image, it looks… annoying? and there is some heavy clipping on their hands.
Smoke is fine.

#5

clipping on finger

#6

i just re edit the smoke and lighting

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/dm_cod4_vacant_rc1001611.jpg

[editline]04:12PM[/editline]

just i dont say your picture is bad ; she is great but I have just wanted to give again more importance a your picture