Bundeswehr soldiers in a asylum.

Edit and pose by me, done with gimp. C&C please.

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Blur and smoke aren’t good. Lighting and contrast is dull.

Overall the original image is better.

I see some clipping on the hands and the picture is a little blurry compared to the original. The smoke is looking good and the overall posing is allright.

Never blur the whole image, it looks… annoying? and there is some heavy clipping on their hands.
Smoke is fine.

clipping on finger

i just re edit the smoke and lighting



just i dont say your picture is bad ; she is great but I have just wanted to give again more importance a your picture