I literally only just saw this, had no idea you’d actually posted the prologue.
It was okay, although I think the biggest problem is tone. Everything seems serious until the last panel with “FLY BEATCHH” and a metrocop thrown out - a character who’s just lost his wife and unborn child wouldn’t shout that (unless it’s a very corny '80s movie), and a CP flying is just inherently funny. It’s a jarring shift for a final panel.
Oh and as Striker89 mentioned, there are no pregnancies in the HL2 universe. I suppose there could be a story there of a miracle pregnancy, a la Children of Men, but clearly you just didn’t know about it and wrote it casually. Too bad.
The bubbles are okay, they’re interesting and thankfully readable, although I wouldn’t diss regular speechbubbles for being “standard”. If it ain’t broke, don’t fix it.
I wasn’t calling anyone “lazy”, but deadlines are a mistake. Usually people either miss them completely or rush stuff to get it done in time.
You should continue this, but settle on a clear tone next time. It could be a bit of a parody and tongue-in-cheek, or just over the top in general.