"But, w-why me? I only had 20 dollars on me..."

http://uppix.net/c/9/f/02d4ac3505b854fc63b4fd893654e.jpg

The Ghost effect could have been better and the camera angle kinda leaves wasted space and shazzle.

Very empty and the ghost effect does look a bit lazy.

He must have a really busy job or there are more like him :v:

busiest there is!

and yes, the ghost effect is lazy AS FUCK, but i had no idea what else to dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Continue this. I wanna see where it goes really badly.

I agree with this

if you don’t, I will fly out to your country and shank you.

Balls this is cool.
I’m with Halfy up above me.

SHANK IS A GOOD THING, RIGHT?

Right?

It’s slicing you up

Pfft, it’s extreme hugging.

With a knife.

in his stomach

Yes it is

It’s like Shag

but with a knife.

and it’s usually aimed at your vital organs.

The dialouge is pretty awkard and unatural… The pic is not bad tho, and I don’t think the ghost effect is too bad.

Dead girls make me sad. I don’t know why, they just do.

I love the idea.

Execution not so much. There’s nothing really wrong with it, but it could have been better.

it looks very lazily done i expected more from you

i have a confession to make.

i was really lazy with this one :frowning:

I can’t say I like this image, the background possibly is why this is not appealing to me at all, Francis is posed strangely, and why would he flip off the dead girl after he walked 10-20 fee from her unless he somehow see’s her ghost? It just does not feel right for me at all.

I hate ghosts.