Did you keep the receipt? You might be able to return him.
my mistake work -> walk
Aww, that takes away the fun. Besides, work sounds better because it makes him sound like a cyborg.
oh, pleeeeeeeease leave it that way!
Nice. Lovely scene-build. I think it’s great how you managed to make it look like the contours vary.
This reminds me of one of the last chapters in the book ‘Rainbow 6’ where they go and try to kill the people that made the bio-tech weapons. Nice. I give an artistic.