"Chopper arrived. Hop in, VIP!"



Only thing I see wrong is the posing on the guy running. Posing on everyone else is great.

That and one guy has a smoke grenade on his head.

sorry, but it’s a flare

You need to fingerpose all of the hands. Looks like they’re clawing at the air.

Calling him VIP seem’s strange. Otherwise the editing is pretty good.