Citizen Patrolling The Woods

My first EVER pose,

Not first released, First EVER
i know it is really shitty, and i fail at Scenebuilds but dont fucking go insane over it
And im not good at photoshop, ill edit it later, but if you want, go ahead and edit it

http://imgkk.com/i/S8YHbD.jpg

and above view(if you want to comment on the pose itself, not the angle)

http://imgkk.com/i/Hw9Zfq.jpg

Constructive Criticism Welcome

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And yes he has HalfLife2Disease

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Halfife2HandDisease

Damn typos

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Another facking edit

My graphics are all the way up

are you sure about the graphics? doesn’t look all the way up. plus major aliasing issues.

ugly

Pretty good for a VERY first… Left Thumb is clipping with the gun, though.

Work on map choice, and finger posing.

I think it’s really good for a first ever try, but you still shouldn’t have released it. The angle looks awkward, the trees are shit, needs editing or something.

Okay.

if those are max graphics, find a different grass model, or at least blur them. the sky also looks bland, try blooming it a bit.

Oh yeah, and use 3d trees instead of those ugly 2d-ish ones

Your graphics are definitely not all the way up. I can see the AA is not, as well as the anisotropic filtering. Plus, you need to type in jpeg_quality 100 in the console before taking a picture.