Citizens attacked by combine creature

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/dm_underpass00013.jpg

Not sure about the blood, something about it doesnt look right. Any suggestings?
Original:

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/dm_underpass00012.jpg

I think what you mean about the blood is that in the front of the citizen, it’s going a bit far too the left. But other than that, this looks real good. Great job!

I love how you made your own creature. It is truly the best part in this picture.

HOLY SHIT WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT!? WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT!

[sp]A jelly Donut [/sp]

I like it, which parts did you use to create the creature?

He used a strider, gun ship, city scanner, and a synth scanner.

This.
Thanks for the comments.
And yes, it is a Jelly donut.

Very nice and creative.
Rated artistic

I like it.

Camera angle is good.
Blood shape is great, although parts are a little bright.
The dodging on the woman’s hair have made her look like an old lady.
The burning has ruined the colours on her face a little.

Thanks for the C&C.