Constriction- Another Wrath attempt

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/752/anotherwrathattempt.jpg

Original
http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/696/deprodigy0002nj.jpg

I probably failed with the editing here.
C&C please.

Notes
That glass model is shit, I know, but it was all I could find.
I also couldn’t edit it to be jagged properly, I need to learn how to do stuff like that.
Cake tastes good.

Blood on grass looks pasted on, and the blood on Dr.M’s face looks out of place.

I shouldn’tve added the bevel and emboss on the glass blood, now that I think about it. that probably was the ultimate downfall on it.

lighting is a bit strong on wrath and takes away his shading

you should’ve made the glass shard transparent I thought it was a killer piece of paper

The glass was a model, so I really couldn’t make it transparent.

this model reminds me of this:

http://www.adondejuegos.com/games/img/404/nwimg404.jpg