Corrupt; Noir Police Story Preview

This is a preview for the first chapter of my comic series: Corrupt.
This chapter isn’t complete yet, so don’t judge it too harshly. I just couldn’t wait to post this, so I’ll just post the rest of the chapter after tomorrow.
http://filesmelt.com/dl/Untitled-112345678910111213141516.jpg

http://filesmelt.com/dl/PG1.jpg

http://filesmelt.com/dl/PG2.jpg

The title picture has some pretty decent posing. The eye posing could use a little work so that they actually look at each other when they talk. In the opening conversation they’re just sort of staring off into space.

It’s a wee bit difficult to see what’s going on in some of the frames. That might be from the effect you applied, or it might just be the map, I don’t know…

Not too sure about the line taken from Splinter Cell.

Still, all in all it looks promising.

Good stuff, looking forward to it

Thanks guys, Its sort of my first outing in comics and posing.