**CraCK** (A fight comic)

My first comic/stopmotion. I really need to improve on keeping the camera at the same place.

CraCK

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Thanks for viewing.

Hate/love/like…

COMMENT.

Ok
Too much clipping.
Bad Camera angles
Kinda bad posing

Needs more motion, it doesnt look like a fight.

Needs more blood.

for a start

Ok

Ok.

That wasn’t really good… Lots of repetitive views, it’s hard to understand whats going on too. the posing isn’t great either. Keep trying though.

You could have like done that fight in 4 pictures.

The easiest way I have found to do fighting action in a comic is to show only the frames where the hit lands. that way the fight ends up feeling more fast paced.