Critisicm please.

Okay, So I run a nation based Garrysmod role-play through Tumblr. It involves posing, photo taking, and LOT of writing. We’re allowed to go off the wall (Hence some of the things you’ll see.) with some of our things. I’m not such a good writer so I though I’d bring my mediocrity to Facepunch and let you guys critique me.

Only Positive words please.

Ha, I’m just fuckin’ with you, feel free to smash my face in as much as you want.

Here it is:

My only suggestion is to add newspaper-like captions to the photos on the home page, other than that, great work.

Good Idea, Should have thought about that. Thanks!

Sounds nice:suicide: