I kind of like it.
That actually looks nice. Why the dumbs?
I was wondering the same thing, I mean, the posing is fine, the effect looks good, and it’s well done overall. Why all the dumbs?
Because I’m a bad guy and nobody likes me 
Is there a tutorial on how you guys make such art like this? I mean, damn, everything is so smooth and pretty.
Looks like first blood in the morning day.
enemy bloom spotted
Lighting is good and realistic.