Dawson's Pilgrimage to Pumkin World

Upon earning his annual two weeks-worth of vacation time from work, Dawson the Riot Officer had his mind set on sightseeing the distant Pumkin World. Needless to say, this would be a decision Dawson would later regret making - there was barely anything to do while there, the locals were abrasive, grotesque pumkinnoids, and he was quickly bewitched by the mind-numbing effects of boredom and annoyance. He managed to keep himself collected up until the second-to-last day of the vacation. It was a fateful visit to a local diner that finally drove poor Dawson over the edge.

Just got back into making scenes after a moderate hiatus. I might be a little rusty for now, but constructive criticism will nonetheless be appreciated.