Day of the Nazi's Part 2

This is the 2nd part of Day of the Nazi’s. Hope you like it!

Well, not funny at all. Sorry to be honest. The posing needs work. And you need to smooth out your speech bubbles.

It’s not supposed to be funny

It was good, just work a bit on your posing and it will be awesome!

Needs better posing and definitely some fingerposing, but good work otherwise.

It’s a good thing you took my advice, was better than your previous one. But you should also work on your posing, and the mood. The mood is very important. Perhaps you’d like to use a darker map. And use a variety of camera angles to do the intensifying work for you. For example, when the nazi spy said “Good bye, my friend”, you could have zoomed to his lower face, showing his evil smirk.