Honestly I think your rag doll posing could use a little work. Also some of the facial expressions were a little dull, you can never have enough over-the-top facial expressions. Oh, also try some different camera angles, I noticed the majority of your shots are either at chest height, or knee height. Try some dramatic face shots, or far away shots.
Read my tips in the previous part + work on your faceposing more than 2 minutes, it’s worth it. Trust me.