"Delta-Zero-Niner, we are going down..."

http://filesmelt.com/dl/harbor2ocean_navalb10007_2.jpg

C&C Gladly Accepted.

To blurry to see the details.

Sorry, I poorly attemped to make it seem like it was going high-speed past the camera.

Boring map choice, pick something more interesting, or if you can make a scenebuild.

no focal point

Its called motion blur.
filters/blur/motion blur for photoshop users, for GIMP I don;t have a clue. For Paint.net I don’t even know it exists.

It’s better to motion blur the background rather than the big focus point

Looks like gaussian blur splashed all over it.

no lighting at all

it’s like a bad out of focus camera

Never use ignite tool for fire, make sure the main part of the picture is focused, get a good zoom level/angle.