I like it but…something about that cigarette bugs me.
Hm… looks like I accidentally went over it while dodging. I think I saw it before, thought I fixed it.
Also he is holding it very odd- the tip should be facing towards the outside of his hand, on the opposite side of the palm.
I have never seen anyone who smokes like that in my entire life… and like everyone i know smokes… o_o overdodged as well… but the pose is good
I hold my cig like that.
You went way too crazy with the burn tool.