First try at this go easy on me.

it’s very empty, there’s jus not a whole lot to look at

posing is okayish I guess, but the dog looks kind of like it’s having a stroke

Nice angle. Zoom in. Do more precise pose. screen is too small to see.

He’s right about the zoom, the pose is good though, i think you nailed it well with the dog and stuff

Thanks guys, I’ll see about that posing and cropping.

Idea is good.

Posing and effects could be better. Keep practicing, and you’ll be awesome!