Dinner's canceled..

This is what happens to people that try to leave the family. The sons are collateral damage.

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Your camera angles remind me of Deathbucket’s.

Actually you did goof up on the camera angle, you probably should have chosen a spot that would have allowed you to zoom in, removing the fish eye/perspective stretching, plus cinematically it would have made more to have been taken from a different angle.

You could have shot from the table, zoomed in from there, and used focus to incorporate the bottle and mug in, pushed off to the side.

Muzzleflash is a little dark.