This is what happens to people that try to leave the family. The sons are collateral damage.
Your camera angles remind me of Deathbucket’s.
Actually you did goof up on the camera angle, you probably should have chosen a spot that would have allowed you to zoom in, removing the fish eye/perspective stretching, plus cinematically it would have made more to have been taken from a different angle.
You could have shot from the table, zoomed in from there, and used focus to incorporate the bottle and mug in, pushed off to the side.
Muzzleflash is a little dark.