Done Deal - Movie Poster

This is just a fake movie poster I made up, I fucked the hand up, but I want to see what you guys think. C & C would be awesome, its not my first poster, but I wanted to get some reactions before I continue to try to make future ones better.

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/679/donedeal.th.jpg

Tips for further improvement:
Try to fill up all that empty space you have there. Empty cities are not common.
Maps are always a big factor. Gm_bigcity, although a good city map, has too many repeating textures and stuff like that.
If you have an editing program (Such as Gimp or Photoshop) it’s a nice idea to experiment. Like maybe adding smoke from the gun or lights from the car.
And one last tip: If you use imageshack, be sure to click on the image until it shows the full view. That way people don’t have to click to see it.

On the bright side, the angle and posing (the posing you can see, at least) are good. I also like the text. I’m looking forward to more stuff from you

Thank you! Any maps city/town maps you’d suggest?

I might recommend
Rp_downtown_V2 http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=42006
Or V3 http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=64181 This one’s mostly good for Combine and stuff
Rp_Evocity V2d http://www.garrysmod.org/downloads/?a=view&id=21727
or 2 http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZY279ZCB

Tell me if you don’t like these or you just need more. Also search the mapping threads on Facepunch and FPSbanana.

those will do fine, I’ll see what I can do.

Oh and one more thing, high quality weapons might be a good idea, too.