The posing looks ok, but the background is really uninteresting and there is not enough motion in the pose to convey that the bike is actually driving. Also. you should use SDoF, its better than regular DoF for screenshots.
Please stop making your own threads. We have this one for a reason. Spend some time there before you start making your own threads.
Honestly, your pictures just do not warrant their own threads at this point.
NO Lara, don’t drive out there! Something’ll happen forcing you to do button mashing sequences!