This is my first try at biotic effect.
The blue on the eclipse mercs is a little to much,i know.
You really should have isolated the power to around the mercs more, also it looks very 2d because it doesn’t look like you did much eraser work.
You also didn’t erase anything at the very bottom of the screen or the top of the screen.
It just happens to look 2d and sloppy.
The posing isn’t bad bu tit really isn’t anything to comment on.
You played with the biotic levels too much and forgot to focus on characters using the biotics. Take your time with the editing, no one is going to be angry at you for being ‘slow’.