Engie's Story Pt 1/2

This is my first major comic. It’s about the story of how the Engineer became a hero. This is part 1. Part 2 should be finished very soon.

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I dunno, its alright, altough speech bubbles could be improve.

SPEECH BUBBLES SHOULD NOT COVER HALF THE FUCKING FACES OF THE CHARACTERS.

Good example of a good speech bubble/comic.

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Don’t be a dick.Tell him nicely NOT LIEK FUCKING DIEZ NASDIAUGDSIAUDBAJVCOH412md):+(*! Mkay settle down