Entering the Basement

My first real pose. I took a while on this and I would like some constructive criticism please! Done on cs_assault (and I had to photoshop the handle on the door because the original door didn’t have one…).

Edit:

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/POSE.png

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Original:
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http://filesmelt.com/downloader/pose_original.png

“Rawr, I’m gonna claw the handle off!”

The posing looks pretty good, but everything around the characters looks bland, plain, and ultimately uninteresting.

Thanks for a quick reply! I’ll keep those points in mind for my next pose!

Edit gives the picture a cold atmosphere, which is fitting; and the smoke is nice. Posing could use a bit of work, but it isn’t bad. The picture is a bit empty though.

Yeah I wasn’t sure what else I could add. The intent was for a cold atmosphere so I guess I did a good job on that part!

evil hand

I really like the steam coming from the grate.

Yeah the hand is rather stupid looking…

A better angle would be nice.

Nice

What map was this on?

Steam doesn’t look like that. Looks like someone is having a major cannabis party under the grid.
Camera angle is pretty bad. Don’t go for high-angles.

Other than that, the posing is pretty good (but, as others have said, remember your fingerposing).

Maybe the people they are going after are drug dealers who do their own. :stuck_out_tongue: Thanks for the input Chesty, much appreciated!