Evolve Comics #1

There’s some FOV issues in some panels where the shot gets a fisheye lens effect because it’s not zoomed in enough, and the comic editing could use some work - for instance, it’s clear that the speechbubbles are just default ones and there’s some weird positioning of the text in the first panel where it’s not even close to centered. This tutorial might help you learn how to make better, custom speechbubbles.

That said, it’s a good effort and I look forward to seeing what comes next! Albeit you’re not gonna have much luck posting a comic on Facepunch, there seems to be a strong disinterest in those around here nowadays.

There’s nothing coming next; I just did this for some posing and lighting practice more than anything else. Thanks for the tips though; I’ll keep 'em in mind for any future comics I do.